15th submission I will read and rate here we GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Edit 1:
Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Edit 2: Ok, I have just read and rated your VN. Here are my thoughts.
I can't write this VN without pointing out how great the visuals and music are in this VN. There are custom sprites and CG's that give off some kind of eerie vibe that's quite fitting for this story. Same goes for the UI, really. Without its unique art and sfx direction, this VN wouldn't be the same.
Regarding the story, the theme was implemented in a reallly creative way. I remember when the theme was announced and us jammers would chat about how we could implement it, and space themes were brought up, but nothing like this. Nothing like having your honey moon interrupted by death by black hole. It's an interesting mix of sci-fi, horror, and rrrrrromance. And that's not the only that makes the creativity put in this game stand out. There was not only this main story I mentioned before, but also mini stories of dreams!!! Sick!!!
Concerning the cons of this VN, apart from the textbox thing and minor typos other comments mentioned (it's ok, I know how it feels like *centerright flashbacks* ), I feel there is something weird with Albert's character. I don't know if it is just me, but I feel as if we get to see a lot about Nova's character (emotions, personality, etc) but not that much about Albert. I get he is suppossed to be compossed and calm, but for me it feels as if he had little to no reaction to the whole end-of-the-world matter. Again, maybe it is just me.
That's what I think of this VN. Thanks for the experience!
A simple, short, yet beautiful story featuring Nova and Al as powerful characters. The portrayal of love and fear is stunning, and none of the submissions so far have affected me as deeply as this one. I wish it were a little longer, and the script could benefit from a more thorough proofreading. The art, music, and sprites are greatly appreciated; your style is truly original. Bravo!
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15th submission I will read and rate here we GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Edit 1:
Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Edit 2: Ok, I have just read and rated your VN. Here are my thoughts.
I can't write this VN without pointing out how great the visuals and music are in this VN. There are custom sprites and CG's that give off some kind of eerie vibe that's quite fitting for this story. Same goes for the UI, really. Without its unique art and sfx direction, this VN wouldn't be the same.
Regarding the story, the theme was implemented in a reallly creative way. I remember when the theme was announced and us jammers would chat about how we could implement it, and space themes were brought up, but nothing like this. Nothing like having your honey moon interrupted by death by black hole. It's an interesting mix of sci-fi, horror, and rrrrrromance. And that's not the only that makes the creativity put in this game stand out. There was not only this main story I mentioned before, but also mini stories of dreams!!! Sick!!!
Concerning the cons of this VN, apart from the textbox thing and minor typos other comments mentioned (it's ok, I know how it feels like *centerright flashbacks* ), I feel there is something weird with Albert's character. I don't know if it is just me, but I feel as if we get to see a lot about Nova's character (emotions, personality, etc) but not that much about Albert. I get he is suppossed to be compossed and calm, but for me it feels as if he had little to no reaction to the whole end-of-the-world matter. Again, maybe it is just me.
That's what I think of this VN. Thanks for the experience!
man son las 3 de la mañana y ando checando FVNs por leer, no me esperaba ver una gran hermano referencia
En primer lugar, te felicito por checar las novelas del MAY WOLF 2024 y apoyar a la furrobanda. Sos genial.
Segundo: Francia
Tercero: De hecho, cuando jugué Password al principio pensé "es como si unos furros estuvieran en Gran Hermano". Luego ví lo que pasó después y XD.
Cuarto:
Del Moro: ¡ESTO ES GRAN HERMANOOOO!
Furia: A BANCARSELAAAAAA
es una manera interesante de ver password xD
Vi que hiciste una VN para la jam, seguro luego la pruebo :D
PD: que pensas de los que ganaron en el GH?
Para mí que Martín y Furia llegaban a la final pero se fueron antes.
A simple, short, yet beautiful story featuring Nova and Al as powerful characters. The portrayal of love and fear is stunning, and none of the submissions so far have affected me as deeply as this one. I wish it were a little longer, and the script could benefit from a more thorough proofreading. The art, music, and sprites are greatly appreciated; your style is truly original. Bravo!
Known issues:
Alchahol should be Alcohol.
Discression should be discretion.
Erroneous text at "...around a central point that resembled a picture." It should read "...around a central point."
Missing space between "...familiar.At the..." should be "...familiar. At the..."