Astrophobia

15th submission I will read and rate here we GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Edit 1:

Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Edit 2: Ok, I have just read and rated your VN. Here are my thoughts.

I can't write this VN without pointing out how great the visuals and music are in this VN. There are custom sprites and CG's that give off some kind of eerie vibe that's quite fitting for this story. Same goes for the UI, really. Without its unique art and sfx direction, this VN wouldn't be the same.

Regarding the story, the theme was implemented in a reallly creative way. I remember when the theme was announced and us jammers would chat about how we could implement it, and space themes were brought up, but nothing like this. Nothing like having your honey moon interrupted by death by black hole. It's an interesting mix of sci-fi, horror, and rrrrrromance. And that's not the only that makes the creativity put in this game stand out. There was not only this main story I mentioned before, but also mini stories of dreams!!! Sick!!!

Concerning the cons of this VN, apart from the textbox thing and minor typos other comments mentioned (it's ok, I know how it feels like *centerright flashbacks* ), I feel there is something weird with Albert's character. I don't know if it is just me, but I feel as if we get to see a lot about Nova's character (emotions, personality, etc) but not that much about Albert. I get he is suppossed to be compossed and calm, but for me it feels as if he had little to no reaction to the whole end-of-the-world matter. Again, maybe it is just me.

That's what I think of this VN. Thanks for the experience!